Honestly, there's juvenile writing and then there's this. I thought I had seen illogical, garbage junk stories already, but seems I hadn't seen anything yet.
This story makes literal zero god damn sense. The pace is incredibly awkward, in just one short volume he has covered content that should fill AT LEAST 3 manga volumes if paced properly. First few pages he's dumped, then he finds an elf, then injured people just throw themselves at him with no rhyme or reason (at the end of the volume seemingly already having 5-6 girls pining for him because he's an "awesome healer"😉, no explanation as to why he's suddenly so famous, no story development, no idea why he suddenly settled down in a ghost town, how he got there. So much happens with zero development beforehand, it's like reading a very shoddy summary.
The characters have no appeal and no proper personality, it's as if someone just tried to copy-paste the surface of other characters they like from other stories. It's rare to see such forced, artificial conversations and actions. The protagonist has the intellect of a piece of gravel, the rest aren't better than him either.
The world building is a joke and that's me being too flattering, if I said what I really thought, I'd be censored. It's so one dimensional and fake that I simply can't understand how any grown human could ever think it up, I personally believe the author must be a middle schooler because I'd be seriously concerned if this is written by an adult. It's so gratingly alien to any form of realism.
J-novel club must be out of their minds to license and translate this junk.
Doesn't help that the art is really bad, the level of a newbie, but what can you expect when the source material is so shoddy? Only a newbie would deign to take this work.
I could write up a better, more logical, comprehensive and interesting story in one evening. The bar is just that low here. The world never ceases to amaze me with how oversaturated the market is nowadays that even trash like this can earn money. I wouldn't be so harsh if this was a training piece never meant to be published, but it takes some serious gall and shamelessness to actually publish and take money for what amounts to an elementary/middle schoolers literary homework.
